- This site is managed by Elizabeth Jarrett Andrew. Elizabeth is an author, writing instructor, and spiritual director living in Minneapolis, Minnesota. She is the author of the novel, Hannah, Delivered, Writing the Sacred Journey, Swinging on the Garden Gate: A Spiritual Memoir, and On the Threshold: Home, Holiness, and Hardwood.
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When tweaking language during the final stages of revision, strive for clarity first. Language is meant to communicate. Sound, rhythm, pacing, word choice, sentence structure, punctuation, paragraphing—all stylistic choices—should convey the content rather than call attention to themselves. Take Strunk and White’s advice: “The beginner should approach style warily, realizing that it is an expression of self, and should turn resolutely away from all devices that are popularly believed to indicate style—all mannerisms, tricks, adornments. … Continue reading